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 Looking at the fall
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Staring out the window where fall has changed the leaves
To gold and bronze and red, some falling from the trees

Landing softly on the landscape among the plants still green
Beneath a clear crisp sky of blue and sun upon the scene

Gaggles of geese on the flyway heading for southern places
Across the heavens in vee shaped flocks that winter soon erases

The changing of the time from summer to a preview of the cold
That follows fall every year as nature's colors there unfold

When all but the evergreen their naked limbs soon will show
The scene of winter bitter cold and the falling of the snow

And when the snow shall cover the earth with a blanket white
We'll soon forget the beauty of the colors in our sight

When we gazed out our windows at the fading light of fall
And colored leaves brightly lit by heaven's golden ball

Were only there so briefly like a painting we've seen before
But couldn't take for our own - so wanted it even more
Posted by Raven at 8:42 PM - 13 Comments   Add a Comment  
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Good Afternoon Raven..........Great Poem Hope you are taking some pictures. That's one sure way to capture the beauty for as long as you want to remember.  
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by Misty (PM , CC ) on Tuesday October 10, 2006 @ 1:54 PM




Thanks Misty, I think that when the time is right I will.

The poem was really not about central California but was meant more for the north eastern part of the country. Where I have been for the fall
colors.


 
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by Raven (PM , CC ) on Tuesday October 10, 2006 @ 2:34 PM




Beautiful poem, I love fall and winter is only good for Christmas, it lasts too long.  
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by Whispered Promise (PM , CC ) on Tuesday October 10, 2006 @ 5:23 PM




Autumn is a favorite time for me, Raven. Your poem touched on all the beautiful things I love about it. ~~~ Peace & Hugs, Rita  
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by Rita B (PM , CC ) on Tuesday October 10, 2006 @ 11:35 PM




Raven, just wanted to say
"Hi" - All is well on my side
 
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by jackie (PM , CC ) on Wednesday October 11, 2006 @ 12:51 PM




...I'm just Spreading Some JOY...Love the Poem...Have a Great Day!...  
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by lilladyreg (PM , CC ) on Tuesday October 17, 2006 @ 2:29 AM




BEAUTIFUL!!!  
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by jackie (PM , CC ) on Tuesday October 17, 2006 @ 2:44 PM




Raven - I simply love it - so beautiful written! Thanks for sharing your talents, June  
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by Praywithhope (PM , CC ) on Tuesday October 17, 2006 @ 3:42 PM




beautiful raven! i love fall, a lot. :)  
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by autumninnewyork (PM , CC ) on Tuesday October 17, 2006 @ 9:31 PM




Beautiful poem Raven. Here it comes, Fall followed by Winter.  
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by MaryElizabeth (PM , CC ) on Friday October 20, 2006 @ 10:04 PM




Just stopping by to say Hi! Have a great night  
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by Misty (PM , CC ) on Tuesday October 24, 2006 @ 11:05 PM




As always another beautifully written poem . . . you are so talented!! Hope you and your family are well!! :)

K.K.
 
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by kool kat (PM , CC ) on Tuesday October 24, 2006 @ 11:18 PM




Hey Raven, just dropped in to say hello. Hope you're doing OK.  
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by MaryElizabeth (PM , CC ) on Thursday October 26, 2006 @ 7:45 AM


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

   
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